As a followup from yesterday, here’s how I would have written this post.
Availability opening for Salesforce projects in manufacturing
Hi, LinkedIn network — My principal mandate is coming to an end soon. So I’ll be available for new opportunities starting May 15th, 2025.
Although I’m best placed as a Salesforce Consultant, I’m potent as a Salesforce Administrator as well.
With over 20 years of experience, I bring the most value to clients in the manufacturing industry. During my last mandate, I helped my client improve operational efficiency by 23%. I also improved the user experience by 15% resulting in an increased revenue of $2M.
If you know of any suitable opportunity for someone who could also benefit from these types of outcome, please contact me.
Thank you in advance for your support!
Here are the key points
- Keep it concise as people don’t like to read
- Indicate your area of expertise and preferred role (max of 2)
- Comment on the benefits you’ve provided and/or accomplishments you’ve made
The takeaway
When you narrow your focus, you actually attract more opportunities. This is because you help others remember you by several precise keywords instead of a blanket “I can do it all” approach.